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How do you Haiku? (self.writing)
submitted 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago) by LostInSpaaaace to c/writing
 

Share a haiku about your day!

A moment of peace,

That's all that I'm asking for,

Please go to bed now.

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[–] Tin 3 points 1 year ago (1 children)

I wrote a haiku
In the dada style, but it's
A little creepy

...

This is a true story. I compose dadaist poetry (I use a method similar to Burroughs' cut-up method, so phrases rather than single words, usually) and sometimes I do haikus. I composed a random haiku for this prompt but it came out much darker than I anticipated, so I wrote the above one the old fashioned way, and I'll share that instead.

[–] LostInSpaaaace 2 points 1 year ago (1 children)

I'm not familiar with dadaist writing. I can't speak for others but I'd like to hear your haiku.

[–] Tin 1 points 1 year ago (1 children)

Dadaist poetry is random. In its purest form one would choose a source (like an article or book) and cut out all the individual words, drawing them randomly to write. I use a cut-up method similar to the one used by Burroughs to write The Soft Machine, which uses entire phrases and not individual words.

To make a haiku, additional editing is often needed (omitting words from the chosen phrase, usually).

Here are a couple of dadaist haikus I've composed. I've decided not to keep the one I referenced because it was just too dark.

bumf*ck

washed tobacco road signs of potential quarry and more on the way

youth

last night the snow fell something of no consequence has happened to me

[–] LostInSpaaaace 2 points 1 year ago

Really interesting. Thanks for sharing.